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Unfortunately, I cannot provide specific examples of my previous editing work, as the manuscripts with my editing marks on them are in pre-publication form and the rights belong to someone else. 

I can, however, provide examples of my own writing style. The list is lengthy because I've tried to include a variety of styles and topics (the themes vary, some have footnotes and some have in-text citations, some are more formal than others, etc.), but I also tried to be sure that most of the examples here are short; I've spared visitors from my lengthy academic discussions of grammar (luckily for you).

Leaving a Lasting Mark: Adams Sherman Hill’s Rhetoric of Style and Usage is a paper written for a February 2004 GSU Rhetoric class in which I was required to discuss a rhetorician’s impact on the field of rhetoric in terms of both his achievements during his own time as well as his lasting effects on rhetoric as it is taught today. The sources are cited according to MLA style, and there are supplemental footnotes. It's probably the most "academic" example I have included here.

Timeless Notes from the Underground: Universal Truths and Today's Fight Club Generation is a paper written in a very relaxed style for a World Literature class at GSU in the summer of 2002. The works referenced are mentioned by title but quotes from them are not cited with page numbers. This paper serves as an example of a comparison of two works—one a classic novel and one a postmodern film.

The Conflict Between Prescriptivists and Descriptivists is a short paper I wrote for an advanced grammar class at Georgia State University in January 2003 that briefly discusses the various definitions of "Standard English."

The Ten Books Most Important to Me is what my children's literature professor called a "personal text set." I compiled this descriptive list in December 2003. (While I mention my agony at being forced to choose just ten books, you'll notice that I managed to sneak in a few more titles....) This example provides the greatest insight into my personal feelings about the books I love.

A Laughing Matter: Improv at Dad’s Garage is a theatre review written for a drama class at GSU in the fall of 2003. Dad’s Garage is one of my favorite places to have fun in Atlanta, and this review gives just a glimpse of why I enjoy it so much. This review uses the citation style of footnotes. It's a bit long, but I can't stop raving about Dad's Garage improv....

Editing for a Small Publisher is a paper I wrote for a GSU editing class in February 2003 that discusses the qualities needed to be a good editor and offers suggestions for beginning an editing career. The sources are cited according to MLA style.

Dying in the Delta is an artist’s statement I wrote in the fall of 2003 and revised in September 2004 to accompany a series of my photographs published in the fall issue of the literary magazine GSU Review. This selection both reveals a bit about my personal feelings of nostalgia and serves as an example of my non-academic writing style(specifically my nonfiction, personal narrative writing style).

Classical Cutting and Cutting to Continuity… Without the Cutting: Would Bazin Approve? was written for a GSU film class in April 2004; it’s about a scene from the movie Confessions of a Dangerous Mind that I particularly enjoy. Be forewarned: the quotes from the movie contain “mature language.”

Intrusive Author Emphasizes Realism and Heightens Emotion in Lemony Snicket’s The Bad Beginning was written in December 2003 for a children’s literature class at GSU. The goal was to focus on only one element of a book and explain its use or importance. This paper uses footnotes; it also reveals just a little bit of what I love about this particular children's book series.

Welty's Words for the Birds... and Children and Scholars, Too is probably the longest example I have included here. It is also the example with the most references and the only example that has been published (in the Winter 2005 issue of the Eudora Welty Newsletter).