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Giving Context to Structure

Content, structure, and language work together.  No one element can make a story work.  Many writers use a series of steps—brainstorming, outlining, drafting, revision, editing, and proofreading—to juggle content, structure, and language.  The order of each step is a matter of choice and fluctuates with story ideas.  Here is my preference:

·         To create content: brainstorm, free-write, draft a first draft

·         To apply structure: outline first draft, then draft second draft

·         To perfect language: revise, edit, and proofread

 

Content refers to the subject matter of a story. 

·         The who, what, when, where, and how of a specific idea 

·         A character (the protagonist) finds himself in a difficult situation at a certain time and place and must deal with that situation.

·         How the protagonist deals with the situation depends on the protagonist’s wants, character, and the nature of the obstacles he must overcome.  

·         Content provides the “story question or problem” that propels the protagonist through the plot and ultimately reveals a universal theme, a jolt, an epiphany, some small observance of life.

·         Content evolves from a premise, notes, a rough draft, research, observation, plus the attitudes and concerns of the writer.

Structure refers to the basic organization of a story.

·         Just as a play is divided into three acts, most stories have three main segments

o        The opening (Act 1) gives a story focus and meaning by providing the premise, setting, and tone of the story as well as hints at the nature of obstacles the protagonist will face.

o        The main body of the story (Act 2) focuses on the protagonist’s actions to resolve the story problem.

o        The conclusion (Act 3) reveals the results of the protagonist’s struggle and infuses that struggle with meaning.

·         Each segment of a story has a similar structure: the overall story as well as each chapter, each scene within the chapter, each beat within the scene

·         Structure also involves other devices such as set-ups and pay-offs, sub-plots, and the shaping of structure specifically to content. 

·         Structure evolves from outlines, note-taking, drafts or a combination of the three.

Language refers the diction and style used to express a story’s idea.  

·         Diction refers the specific words that are chosen

·         Style refers to how those words are combined, the order, the length of sentences and includes the use of literary devices such as metaphor, symbolism, and allusion.

·         Grammar keeps writing clear and understandable.

·         Language evolves from revision and rhythm.

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